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One Leaf

One small leaf still clings To the top of the tree Basking in the brittle light Of a cold and windy afternoon It seems not to know That the season for gold Has passed on by With the ruthless hands of change I, on the other hand Sit looking out At the nearly naked tree With my own tunnel vision And like the leaf I cling to my own golden world Where the winds of time Cannot blow me Away Until I'm good and ready

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/16/2009 12:18:00 AM
Love the inner poem pathos of the first stanza Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:19:00 AM
Great imagery Carrie and I really like how you connect yourself to the leaf in the poem. I can identify with holding on! Thanks for your supportive comments on my winter poem. All the best, Krista
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Date: 12/6/2009 7:07:00 PM
tenacity and or stubborness ( in a good way) :-) ...... great job C.A. your work aways inspires me ! much love......
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Date: 12/6/2009 2:49:00 PM
Makes me smile, Carrie ... here in the NWest are skies are blue, the sun is out and it is about 17 degrees this afternoon with the windchill .... brrrrr ... but, like you, I look out at a couple of trees that have those last gaspers also ... smile ... Hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday and 2010 is good for you!!
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:07:00 AM
You dig your heels in, girl! You have a right to be here! Great Verse, Carrie! Thank you so your kind comments! Peace and love to you, Audrey
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Date: 12/5/2009 10:18:00 PM
This is so nice Carrie...Love it...Marty
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:25:00 PM
Be that stubborn leaf in that tree, I like your spunk! Stay warm and be Blessed. Ron
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:48:00 PM
hmmm. we may well come from the same tree, Carrie. Another delightful, thought provoking muse . I definitely like your styles !Thank you for sharing it with us. -Robert
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Date: 12/5/2009 3:33:00 PM
Hold On to yuor golden world Carrie cos life is what we make it..indeed a gem --Charma
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Date: 12/5/2009 3:14:00 PM
Very provocative the way you see yourself in the struggling leaf, Carrie. A creative analogy to say the least and you really cap this work off nicely in the last several lines. Why shouldn't we see the world as "golden" if that's what we choose. You seem to be a woman of great strength. Very admirable. Enjoyed reading this poem -- lot of food for thought! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2009 3:01:00 PM
like this piece and kinda reminded me of a Charles Simic poem... not saying you are him because this is your style and its awesome. Anyway enjoyed this poetry and enjoy your night. :)
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Date: 12/5/2009 2:37:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful poem, Carrie. I love the comparison between the leaf and you, and I hope I have the fortitude to hand on as determinedly to my "golden world". ~Juliane
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