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A Humble Man - Charles Wood

A humble man is what I am before you. You see, I am not worthy to say… “Sir, may I have your daughter’s hand, But please yield to your wife’s pleas: Calm down a while as I explain what’s deep in my heart. Why deprive your daughter of a possible life of pure bliss..? Because sir, understand that love’s triumph seldom fails. You see sir, “a humble man standing before you is what I am. The love and protection you have for your daughter I understand. But you see “simple is what raised me, A simple man, with simple needs. A simple man who is able to love deeply and fairly. Yes I have made my fair share of mistakes. Might have scarred an angel or two, But who was ever born with a heart of gold..? A humble man is what I am before you. You see sir; the heart is simply out of our control. How can one ignore a beautiful feeling? A feeling that pulls hard at every fore of your soul. How at some point we all wish we could roll over and forget its undying existence. But sir, who was ever given a constraint heart..? Yes, a humble man is what I am. You see, I work sir, to earn a living You may as you have, call it slave work, Unworthy to have your daughter as my own. But you see, these hands are built, Built to struggle and earn a better life, No man was ever born fulfilled sir, And no man ever chooses to be born poor. A humble man is what I was brought up to be, But you see sir; it hurts me to see your daughter turn her face away Turn away, to hide soft tears, which ooze dejectedly from her pure eyes. What crime have I committed not to be regarded worthy..? Because you see sir, at the end of the day love’s triumph seldom fails. A humble man, with a heart that will strive, Simple ways that will overcome all tribulations, A heart that has been pulled from its place of sheer hopelessness Hands that will slave for a better life and future for your daughter. An upbringing that will sweep her off her feet every chance there is; Is what I am sir. So you see sir, please listen and understand that love’s triumph seldom fails When two hearts are willing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2015 12:49:00 AM
Hello Herzel... You have written some great passages and quotes in your poem Herzel. Very enjoyable to read. Thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 4/9/2014 4:41:00 AM
"No man was ever born fulfilled sir, And no man ever chooses to be born poor". No words could be truer
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Date: 1/16/2014 8:46:00 AM
A belated congratulations! Well done.
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Date: 10/14/2013 9:18:00 AM
wow,,,, perfect.... ......................... ... ..... i love how you write in today's style but poetically,,,,,,
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:17:00 AM
Hi, a poignant write...I liked this one.. Ken
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:11:00 PM
Great poem! You really got into the theme by using language and lifestyles suited to the era. "Love's triumph seldom fails" is an awesome idea and you worked it beautifully into the poem.
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Date: 10/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:39:00 PM
you have expressed the painting beautifully...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 4:48:00 PM
Beautiful message and awesome final line! Big congrats in the contest.
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:27:00 AM
Beautiful poem Herzel... really loved every stanza...
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Herzel Poshiwa
Date: 9/30/2013 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Felix, much love...xoxo
Date: 9/22/2013 7:04:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this fine poem... , Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings,Herzel. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~
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Herzel Poshiwa
Date: 9/23/2013 7:32:00 AM
Thanks so much, I am very honored to have made the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list. Its breathtaking
Date: 9/19/2013 4:19:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful....#lostforwords. And helllllo home boy!
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Herzel Poshiwa
Date: 9/23/2013 7:31:00 AM
hey Tshego and thank you for your comment much appreciated Home boy......
Date: 9/17/2013 5:10:00 PM
A very beautiful and heartfelt poem! This represents the painting well. Great work! I wish you good luck in the contest!...I have also entered this contest with my poem titled, "Love Will Triumph"...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. I really appreciate it!
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Herzel Poshiwa
Date: 9/23/2013 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Kelly, I am a great admirer of your poetry. Good luck on the contest as well....xoxo

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