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A Huge Orange Moon

It came up very slowly from behind the maple grove to illuminate the June sky, it didn't radiate much as other nights; I stood silent fascinated by a huge orange moon hanging over the dark forest... never thought to behold its magnificence! No sighting of this magnitude, ever did spark my fantasy to make each moment spent under it a night of thrilling discovery! And that huge orange moon rose higher on the Globe and met the Northern Star which is very distant from a planet that's very dull! Written on July, 4 2013 for Natan's A contest, " Fantasy "

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Date: 7/11/2013 6:44:00 PM
Great images of the moon looking at our planet from the Galaxy of the norther star. You've portrayed an alluring fantasy and congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
Andrew a magical night scene you've conveyed in your poem. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:46:00 AM
Hi Andrew big congrats on placing and Ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:40:00 AM
AWESOME............. LOVE* SKAT
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