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Below is the poem entitled A HUGE ORANGE MOON which was written by poet Andrew Crisci. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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It came up very slowly 

from behind the maple grove

to illuminate the June sky,

it didn't radiate much as other nights;

I stood silent fascinated

by a huge orange moon

hanging over the dark forest...

never thought to behold its magnificence!

No sighting of this magnitude,

ever did spark my fantasy

to make each moment spent under it

a night of thrilling discovery!

And that huge orange moon

rose higher on the Globe

and met the Northern Star which is

very distant from a planet that's very dull!

Written on July, 4 2013
 for Natan's A contest,
" Fantasy "

Copyright © Andrew Crisci

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Great images of the moon looking at our planet from the Galaxy of the norther star. You've portrayed an alluring fantasy and congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Andrew a magical night scene you've conveyed in your poem. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 5:46:00 AM
    Hi Andrew big congrats on placing and Ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:40:00 AM
    AWESOME............. LOVE* SKAT