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A Heaven In You

in the morning when i wake and when the sun starts to shine. and on that stretch of road that leads to work you're always on my mind. i think of you when im at work cause it helps speed up the time. and being away from you for so long seems like such a crime. if loving you is wrong then i dont want to be right. becuase holding you so close to me feels so good at night. if i could freeze a moment it would be when i look into your eyes. because its like looking into a universe as vast as the open skies. white represents the sillouettes of the formations in the clouds. and then theres baby blue just like the sky above me now. as i look deeper into your eyes its like glancing from a far. the shine in your pupil looks like a cluster of shiny stars. if i look a little deeper im sure that i'll see heaven too. but why would i search for heaven when heaven is in you

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Date: 6/1/2013 2:40:00 PM
John, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/1/2013 2:08:00 PM
Well done with the H M John..pleased to read this bright poem on your love..'
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Date: 11/30/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 8:49:00 AM
Very nicely said John. Congratulations
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:16:00 PM
wow, that ending line is awesome, John.Why would i search for heaven when heaven is in you? Sounds like a divine love. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:41:00 PM
Ah John, this speaks to me in such a lovely way. You take the idea and weave such a lovely verse. Love your sweet expressions.
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John Castro
Date: 9/21/2011 1:45:00 PM
lol do you have blue eyes??=)

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