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Winter Blues

Another year has come - chillingly - and more chillingly for me than in decades heretofore. I watch it ranting from my window as I recall. . . . The year already past had tugged me from those tame and toasty days when I lay face up to sun dreaming that my summer would never end. It brought me to this winter when it withered up and died, but half a century and more of memories had fallen for me by now. Like pretty crystal flakes they fell, drifting through my mind - places, events and people. Oh, those people I looked up to in my youth - fallen as the snow! How many pretty snow flakes have melted now away? Only my memories of them remain. . . memories now piled up like snowdrifts in my brain. Yes, the newborn year has arrived. Just one month old and already, it has lost its crawl. This infant’s aging process parallels, on the larger scale, that fleeting span of time known as life - a time that all the living undergo. The new year carries on (as must we all) to soon complete its cycle. Let it bluster. Let it wail. Let it rattle at my door, for soon enough, all signs of it will cease. Written 2/12/11 Now used for 'A STRAND (1061)' Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/11/2020 1:23:00 AM
There is so much soul in this... the chill of weather, the wistful recollection of youthful reveries, the elegiac lament of lost loved ones and mentors. I love the line "memories now piled up like snowdrifts in my brain". This is just terrific - a fav. ~ John
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Date: 5/5/2018 9:08:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your top wIn with this wonderful penning Andrea! xomo :)
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Date: 1/14/2018 11:04:00 PM
Congrats on this superb first place win. No surprise here!
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Date: 1/13/2018 1:52:00 PM
A sadly beautiful poem Andrea. Congratulations on your excellent first place win.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:56:00 AM
wow chillingly sad to the bone, great poem thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 12/19/2011 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "It's Up To You" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 11:01:00 AM
Love this Andrea, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest.. Glad you chose this one :) hope your Sunday is a good one.. love Wilma
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:25:00 AM
Oh I remember this winter beauty! That last stanza always gets to me :D! Super congrats again to you and urrgh I really must go! ok see you soon, sweetie! hugs to you!
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Date: 12/18/2011 3:13:00 AM
I love the flow of this poem.Congratulations Andrea on your win.
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Date: 12/17/2011 2:36:00 PM
I think you should do more free verse Andrea. I personally love the style and I find I can concentrate more on the message then trying to make a rhyme. Congratulations
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Date: 12/17/2011 1:01:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your wonderful win. In my "you pick a poem contest" ;-) Thank you for the support,..p.d.
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:12:00 AM
Lovely, thought provoking write, Andrea. I love the snowflakes part, especially. Beautiful
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:27:00 PM
just saying hi sweetie pie :) hope to read new posts from you :D --hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:06:00 AM
I can feel this poem, it's one of those that give you goosebumps. I especially like how you referred to your memories as pretty crystal flakes, totally original. Thanks for commenting my poem as well, Miranda L.
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Date: 2/19/2011 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 9:57:00 AM
congrats on your 3rd place win andrea! enjoyed reading this, love the opening lines...
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:14:00 AM
As I predicted earlier, Chris did like this entry. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 2/18/2011 11:44:00 PM
awesome Andrea, just love reading these, Chris' contests do seem to bring the best out of soupers, this is no exception, congrats. Harry
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:57:00 PM
Unique poetry and very thought provoking. many congrats for this win dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Chris, Andrea
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:31:00 PM
Love it..the last stanza is awesome...congrats. BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:07:00 PM
whose this winning a Free Verse contest! Why our Andie!!! Great job here! Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:51:00 PM
Super yay for you Andrea :) really very happy to see this in the top 3 ^_^ I loved this one & yay-- --beautiful winner indeed --super congrats again to you :D-- hugs to you :)
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