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A Failing Romance (Pt. I)

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A Failing Romance (Pt. I)

Memories dance in her head
As she waited for his flight to land
She remembered their first date
The first time they held hands 
The first time they kissed
The first time they said 'I love you'
It was long overdue for her to see him
He dreaded his flight was going to land
He knew it was wrong 
But he had found someone who he loved dearly
He loved his high school sweetheart
But the new person was everything 
He'd been looking for
They'd spent so much time together 
The past two weeks
     (He gets off the plane...)
She runs to greet him
Only to stop in her tracks 
And see him holding on to another woman
Her first instinct was to cry
But she chose not to jump to conclusions
And run to greet him
Maybe she was just a friend
     (He spots her...)
How am I going to explain this?
She is going to be crushed 
Maybe I can still keep this a secret
But that would only make it worse
Only time will tell
But I love her
But I also love this woman too
What to do, what to do?


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  1. Date: 7/25/2010 8:05:00 PM
    Looking forward to the next installation.............

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 5:32:00 AM
    Intriguing write, cant wait to see how it ends.. Bb Wilma

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 10:05:00 PM
    Nice twist at the end.

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 9:02:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 8:52:00 PM
    I enjoy it..,nice intriguing write...^_^ v