A Dragon's Tale

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Kicking up dust with my Mary Jane shoes
too many years ago now to be counted
in the darkening shadows of one bronze summer day
I was holding his hand, with assurance and trust
filled with concoctions of sugared excitement

I remember our feet crossing the plank
Dad was giving me time to back out, with grace
Giving me a last chance to alter my mind
"There's no real disgrace,"....he said, to be kind

But I was determined, insistent and firm!
How many times, had they taken their turns...?
Big brother and Dad....while I had to learn
that I wasn't up to the challenge or race?
The infantile shame of the "no-hall-of-fame?"

Dad finally relented, to my mother's chagrin
then took hold of my hand,.......and with bravado...I claimed!

Sticky was the heat, and so were my hands,
as we watched and we waited, with fidgety impatience
Then, slowly and surely we crept, up the line

We boarded the Dragon, a faceless contraption, 
that seemed quite familiar...and oddly resembled
the creation my brother assembled at home.
Made out of metal, "Erector Set" labeled
Sitting so proudly, upon the card table.

A strange looking man with a sunburned face
and a head that seemed too small for his burly, puffed shape
escorted us into a red metal bucket,
Strapped us down tight, without much discussion

Before the sound of train wheels began 
I buried my face in the arm of my Dad....
Blinded by fear, and too scared to see,
Suddenly gripped by the Dragon's fierce roar

I know we had the ride of my life....
The Dragon, I'm sure was fast as could be
But I was not harmed, and I was not charmed
I only remember my weak shaky knees, 
and walking the plank into my mother's warm arms



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For Contest: "Dragons"......sponsored by Silent One
7/10/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
Tremendous winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:09:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this superb write Carrie!
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Date: 10/22/2015 11:05:00 PM
A lovely write, Carrie, well done. Viv x
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Date: 10/22/2015 8:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend with a fine poem.A7
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Date: 10/22/2015 4:30:00 PM
lovely take on the theme Carrie - glad to see other's thinking outside the 'dragon' box congrats
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:16:00 PM
HEY did I inspire you OR am I reading your mind long distance from CT???? Nope I did not KNOW the history behind the name of the type of SHOE..YOU smarty pants!!! LOL nice writing! Light & Love
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Date: 7/12/2012 3:26:00 PM
did comment but now it skipped pages. Enjoyed your poem and nice to look back on childhood days. Cute poem. love phyl
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:48:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem on county fair Carrie.Such memories creep in my mind whenever I think of a fair.These days you are not writing so many poems I think...Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages....kash
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Date: 7/11/2012 12:22:00 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Carrie and I wish all the best to you in the contest. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2012 8:06:00 PM
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