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A Death

a death i died today for a love that went away a cold and windy day i could not ask her stay the love we had was warm and twas so beautifully formed but roses have thorns and memories, they warn a tear is in my eye and i almost start to cry, remembering my tears were ment for someone else don't take love and move it somewhere else trapped by what love is i'll just stay where i am i'll go on the best i can and sometime long to touch a hand the river is flowing into an ocean and the tide has torn us assunder where will we drift i now wonder i pray, don't let the tide take you under

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/21/2011 1:07:00 AM
John,,, thank you for your comment on my poem.. you will meet again.... Enjoyed stopping by your poem tonight..have a good one,..LINDA
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:00:00 PM
It's not easy to be a lover is it John, a new problem lurks around every corner. Great verse full of emotion! Nice to see you visiting again - by the way, I didn't get your soup mail.
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Date: 11/20/2011 1:25:00 PM
Always nice to read a new post from you John. Yes, I don't know if white pumpkins would make a good pie but I do like pumpkin pie. Darn cold out today so staying inside to stay warm. love phyl
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Date: 11/20/2011 10:08:00 AM
Wow! You are really posting some great work, John. I know the inspiration behind this write and you are just following God's plan now after losing April. Have you ever heard the song "Every Rose Has Its Thorns"? The line that follows the first is "Every night has it's dawn." Like you, I continue to search for that light. Beautiful work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2011 9:03:00 AM
I missed this one on my way through and thought how beautifully written...yet how heartbreaking...luv shannon
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Date: 11/20/2011 7:20:00 AM
Smile ~ Very touching. Hopefully she has Faith for then, she'll be fine! You know, my friend ~ Warm regards always, John!:) ~
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