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A Day Will Come

Insulated in layers of clothing I run from house to car from car to house The weather stings as it contacts my skin I long for you friend You taunt me during the winter playing hide and seek with my feelings When you come to me the air so frigid my pleasure evaporates but I look and I watch and I wait A day will soon come when you will entice me to you I will watch as you amuse yourself On the deck with shadow puppets and I will come to you I know now as I step into you I will be filled with desire for your warmth I will shed my layers and let my skin bask in your glory The glow of your love will tend to every part of me I have longed for you Satisfy this craving that has Sustained me all these many months Bathe me that I might savor this time with you and indulge in the ecstasy of our time together

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/7/2009 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Ms Lady on your win in Christie's contest.. Huggsss , Tyesha
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Date: 3/4/2009 7:59:00 AM
Dear Laurie - Congratulations on your WIN in Christie's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Christie's contest, Laurie! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/26/2009 1:47:00 PM
"The glow of your love will tend to every part of me." Just one example of WOW! "On the deck with shadow puppets".....this adds a great air of mystery and musing to the piece. Oh, yes! I enjoyed this one mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 2/26/2009 7:06:00 AM
Now cut that out. Poor guy is gonna think he died and went to heaven. Thanks for your comments and yes you can use Battle Scars any way you want. Too many people only see the anger and not the beautiful kid behind it all. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:12:00 PM
Congrats Laurie on your awesome and well deserved win in Christie's contest! Love the personification here. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:37:00 AM
I can feel the warmth...after all those dreaded cold stinging mornings while running to the car! Congratulations, Laurie. I loved this when I first read it! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:35:00 AM
Laurie congratulations on placing in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Laurie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:50:00 AM
Nice poem Laurie, I can't wait for summer either. Great write...Raul
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Date: 2/23/2009 2:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your sweet comments-- I think.....:)
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Date: 2/22/2009 7:33:00 AM
I am thinking sun and loving the openness of interpretation here, especially since you did not list this as Personification. Clever girl. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/20/2009 12:17:00 PM
......ps... and thank you Laurie for all your recent comments... mucho esteem I pass to thee... LOL
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Date: 2/20/2009 11:31:00 AM
Ah yes Laurie.... roll on summer... please roll on !!!.... A sun/summer worshiper like me.... great write Laurie ! Thanks for your comment on Echoes
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Date: 2/20/2009 10:38:00 AM
Hi Laura, this sweet reflection can be taken two ways. From the perspective of awaiting spring's warm sun (on the deckwith shadow puppets) and also as one who waits for her lover to return in the coming months. Absolutely beautiful! Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2009 8:12:00 PM
Laurie, You are trippin me out with this one..Your imagination ran off here and never came back.LOL. All the fantasizing and longing you expressed here...It sounds like an deep passionate love affair you got going with Mr right, I was going to ask you if he had a friend..Too many hot showers I guess,LOL. Incredible imagery here. Awesome write indeed!!Keep writing these amazing pieces Ms Lady, God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/19/2009 2:31:00 PM
that doggone sun ..:-) can't wait for summer to get here so we can visit your friend more often........what a fun write!
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Date: 2/19/2009 1:38:00 PM
Laurie, this is an excellent write. Rich with strong emotion and imagery. Wonderfully passionate! Great piece, Laurie! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/19/2009 5:53:00 AM
and while you bask I hope you get sunburned... oh wait we're not talking about the sun? joking-- don't get tied up in knots--- Good write Mrs Sunshine well penned...
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Date: 2/18/2009 9:10:00 PM
". . . but i look and i watch and i wait. . . /with shadow puppets" Well. . . what can I say except for "thanks" in enjoying what I write. . . while I enjoy you. Must be great to be you in some coffee shop somewhere. . . just absorbing, the way you do. Yup, one to another -- well done on this piece Laurie. . . dangerously close.
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Date: 2/18/2009 10:48:00 AM
A torrid little hush-hush thing you and the sun have going on!! Me jealous? Naaah! = ) Exellent work!! Much love, Steve
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:19:00 AM
Warming words Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observtions
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Date: 2/18/2009 6:53:00 AM
Smile~Yes, "Mr. Sunshine! "~What a truly wonderful poem which you penned here dear lady!!! Classical and fluent~laced amid passion and beauty!!!~" Good Morning Gifted & Precious Laurie Ginn!!!"~ "You" are turning out to be quite a writer priceless lady~Smile~ and I always sincerely love, to see such as this!!!~"Amazingly Beautiful Write~Filled With Images of Many Many Wonders!!!"~"My Love & Warmth Always, To You & Your Loves, John!!!":)
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Date: 2/18/2009 6:49:00 AM
Mmmmm....behind our backs... this secret affair you are having with that devil Mr Sun....hope he has enough passion to share his hot breath with the rest of us!! Sounds like he is worth the wait!!
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