Work Flu

I am surrounded Coughing here and coughing there Where do I escape Edward J Ebbs - January 17, 2015

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/11/2016 6:34:00 PM

A seven Edward, i do love the Haiku form. Now thisa one i toally relate too. I have a bad infection due to the same thing my friend. There is no escape, you can but hope that you don't catch. Nice work as always Ed. A seven and as i am sort of saving Haiku, into my faves it goes....Vladislav

Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/11/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thank You Vadislav :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/19/2015 12:40:00 PM

I do love haiku form and I really enjoyed this one Edward!Charma

Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/19/2015 2:39:00 PM

Thank You Charma :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/17/2015 7:49:00 PM

Very nice pen Ed! I feel so bad for you very dear friend. It must be hell to be in that position. A 7 from me! :) have a great weekend! Love and hugs! xxxx D .^o^""

Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/17/2015 10:09:00 PM

Thanks, back at you :)