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A darkness with in

At times I feel as if I lost my soul, a part of me not seen My heart beats towards all direction and I imagine myself not alone, but in love Tho I feel so empty inside I still live My spirit shakes, yet this pain won't cease I live in memories past, and slowly I too weep You promised forever, and I believed your words You held me when no one would look at me I was cold and hungry but alone with you I never felt I fell to my knees afraid and asked the heavens of your whereabouts Yet the vast universe stood silent still The tears that built within my eyes grew heavy But my hands shook and I felt you forever lost The one try love, a story once shared had came to an end I wrote pages endlessly, in hope the words might reach your ears I waited an eternity and still no reply Maybe the love really did die, but the soul still walks As the wind is felt but not seen, so is the soul tie between you and I I'm sorry I didn't make it to your wedding, but perhaps you can make it to my funeral Words of grace to be in order, let the world know My voice lives still My art a piece of my heart Let them know I live in my poetry, and I will forever love you no matter where love takes me As the light shines my heart holds a darkness within

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  1. Date: 5/17/2014 3:37:00 PM
    Great poem with feelings

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:26:00 AM
    Beautiful emotional poem of heart. Enjoyed a lot. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 12:52:00 PM
    You get a 7 for this one. It is sad, but beautiful. Thanks for reading my poem. Many blessings....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:24:00 AM
    This is a n introspective and passionate piece of work very well penned. I think we can all identify with this at some stage of our lives... love the line "Let them know I live in my poetry"...certainly we do. Thank you for stopping by my poems.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 12:13:00 AM
    Love this one !!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 2:56:00 AM
    Very touchy poem Edward. A great lover. may be she is not very lucky to live in your life . Thanks for your comments on mine. Hugs/manel

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 11:09:00 PM
    I absolutely love this, feel it and understand. The end is brilliant..."My voice lives still...Let them know I live in my poetry" just stunning!!!!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Edward well conveyed emotions. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/5/2013 11:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:35:00 AM
    the heart is art. I like that line. and why would your heart show a darkness within... anyways. you write well, and always write what you feel... Linda

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/5/2013 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tank you :)
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:14:00 AM
    - There will be a new day ..... - A poem which is very well written with emotion Edward! - Anne-Lise :)

    Orozco Avatar Edward Orozco
    Date: 6/5/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :)))
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:31:00 PM
    truly awesome,,,, I've written a few like this, thank you for reading my Caturday ;}

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Hi Edward! thanks for visiting my page appreciate it... about your poem is really good...enjoy featuring ur past---have a great day!---ELAI