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A Cigarette Betrayed

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A Cigarette Betrayed

I’m living in anticipation
With other cigarettes who are also growing impatient 
We’re waiting
To be the next chosen one 
Now, the door opens and we’re soaked by the light of the sun
Screams of “PICK ME!, PICK ME!”
She plucks me from the bunch; I’ve never felt so free 
Straight from the prison she sticks my butt in her mouth, which is odd
Now, she puts a flame in my face and sets me on fire, OH MY GOD!
But hold the phone, this feels great
I wish I could tell the fellas back in the pack their fate
She takes me out of her mouth and holds me with two fingers
She blows my smoke in the air where, for a couple seconds, it lingers
She taps my back, a feeling so good it might be a sin
Some embers of mine fall to the ground and disappear with the wind

After 5 minutes of pure bliss 
She once again pulls my butt off her lips
Smoke, as usual, flows into the daylight
I’m waiting for the taps and for the embers to take flight
But instead, she suddenly flicks me away without a sound
I fly through the air, drop, and crash on the ground 
No big deal, It was certainly an accident 
At least I’m still lit
Then as I look up I see the sole of her shoe driving down 
All I can do is stare and frown
She crushes me on the asphalt
Then smears me around; sprinkling the wound with salt
I disintegrate to ash
How could she just treat me like trash?
I thought that feeling would last forever
But I guess you decided, for no evident reason, it was time to sever 
I’ve been betrayed
Alone I wither and decay. 

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  1. Date: 3/13/2012 3:06:00 PM
    lol am guilty of that lol its realy a fun poem. Thanx for shairing. I jst can't stop loughing

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 9:40:00 AM
    oh my god wait... it was a cigarett????? i was confused i thought u were in prison then like got rapped and then caught on fire and fell out a window!!! ok now i understand... it was awsome!!

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 9:34:00 PM
    AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I read it twice. I love it.........I love it. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 4:28:00 AM
    I think you may have just written a masterpiece!

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 3:48:00 AM
    I really like this one Kyle....imaginative and creative.....Well penned!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 2:54:00 AM
    oh, kyle.. an imaginative use of metaphors and images so vivid i feel the nicotine in my eyes! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 2:15:00 AM
    Laughing..poor for the comment on my poem..

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 1:56:00 AM
    Quite a creative composition, written from the standpoint of a cigaretter. Well done! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on mine tonight. Caroline.

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 1:48:00 AM
    real good work kyle....nice biographic picture you drew of cigrette.......