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A Certain Stink

Have you ever noticed how raunchy our children can smell? Like the stench that arises from, say, a rotting seashell. It's true; cohabitation can impose a certain stink. But family ignores it, despite what others might think. Sometimes a polite request is personal and discreet. And other times, dad might yell, for God's sake, go wash your feet. Baths are most often paid for when odors can't be ignored. Perhaps you'll offer a toy or some treat as a reward. When they sit on an incline, foul gasses tend to leak out. And with a rubicund blush, they'll blame the dog, no doubt. We have learned to tolerate most odors floating around. But those silent, deadly farts are the grossest smell, hands down. (Quatrain) 3/5/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:55:00 PM
A poem that needing to be written, Emile. LOL
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 7:25:00 AM
Emile, a fun poem, this is family reality isn't it, and even my cat has gas, its part of life and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem Oh Why, The Pain of Night Dreams, much appreciated . . .
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks, just a little humor to break up the day. Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 11:29:00 PM
I agree. haha!! someone else's!! Isn't it interesting how our own don't bother us? My dog's are really bad!!! he sleeps on the bed with us and when it happens.... UGGGGG. This was great fun , Emile. Oh, and I have to tell you, when I was growing up, our one little bathroom for TEN people was right next to the downstairs KITCHEN. I am amazed to this day that our toilet did not give us nearly the problems our TWO toilets give us, just my husband and me. They don't make toilets like the old ones!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/6/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, it's all just part of being human, but a funny part nonetheless. Emile.

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