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A Brewing Storm

A storm is brewing in the south Lightning flashes thunders shout Rain is coming without a doubt Creatures lookout, creatures lookout Rain is pouring, lightning flashes East strong winds bring rain that clashes Blowing through the door's tight sashes Lightning flashes, lightning flashes Its been awhile since such display We've had many, many dry days Wonderful moisture to purvey Thank You today, thank You today Sponsor: Kim Merryman Contest:Monotetra Written this July 5, 2013

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Date: 5/17/2016 3:48:00 PM
I love the emphasis your repeating lines give to each stanza. Re a lly well done Sara. Congratulations on your top win! #7. ; )
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/17/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by with congrats..This was inspired by a real storm..Sara
Date: 5/17/2016 5:29:00 AM
Sara, this is a beautiful write! Congrats on your winderful win!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/17/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by with congrats..I appreciate the you taking time to read and comment..Sara
Date: 5/15/2016 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/15/2016 10:00:00 PM
The terrifying and exciting imagery really brings this poem to life... I enjoyed it very much, Sara. Nicely done! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 4/16/2016 12:19:00 PM
Very good write Sara...best wishes
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Date: 7/5/2013 10:44:00 PM
A job well done for this challenge, Sara. You find inspiration all around yourself.
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Date: 7/5/2013 8:21:00 PM
We had a reprieve from the rain today, I was able to mow our yard, fun fun! You have written a very awesome write here my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening, what a tremendous piece, such a brilliant poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/5/2013 8:21:00 PM
lovely stuff Sara.Loved this.
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Date: 7/5/2013 6:39:00 PM
Nicely done on this wonderful poem. Had a bit of rain this morning but so far no loud storms around. Thank goodness. love phyl
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