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A Bird Flies Over

a bird flies over sings a beautiful song… springtime evolves Russell Sivey Entrant into Poet Destroyer A's "Your own favorite haiku." contest 2/15/2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:03:00 PM

Russell, stopping by to say Hello, and read this one again... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2013 9:36:00 PM

Enjoyed the use of imagery, I can't wait for the Spring

Donna Jones

Date: 2/26/2013 4:54:00 PM

Congrats...

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/22/2013 9:13:00 PM

Great haiku, Russell! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:22:00 PM

Yayyy Russell. Congrats to you.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2013 9:18:00 AM

So cheery and hopeful! Congrats Russell!

Len Gasun

Date: 2/22/2013 9:12:00 AM

This is an amazing haiku my dear friend, Russell! I extremely love it and the very wonderful image and great feelings it gives! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! love and hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:23:00 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku Russell, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/21/2013 7:02:00 PM

Congrats Russell...Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/21/2013 6:21:00 PM

way to go Russell! 1st place

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:04:00 PM

HELLO RUSSELL, now this is my favorite haiku... good choice... xox~PD

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/17/2013 3:03:00 AM

very nice

Joy Wellington

Date: 2/16/2013 11:28:00 PM

Thanks for this beautiful scenery...I could be sitting under the shade of a tree taking it all in. Lovely! Appreciate your visit and comments. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 8:19:00 PM

I sure like that line: springtime evolves. I am really hoping to see an early evolution this year!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/16/2013 11:15:00 AM

If it's OK for me to help you here in commnets let me know, I am glad to see you trying! [ think suject line 1/ action line 2- an extra bit of sensory info which could have happned in the same 'snapshot or haiiku moment] so 1 subject 1 action ;) Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2013 8:02:00 AM

You make it look easy