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A Better Place

I lay staring up at the sky Tears pooling by the way side Thinking How lovely it would be To be a bird Up high Flying free Have no worries ever again So many problems Made by men Looking down at what we’ve done At our own devastation Longing to be above it all Soaring to a better place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/12/2011 12:54:00 PM
very lovely
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Kimberly Larocca
Date: 12/1/2011 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/30/2011 3:27:00 PM
This shows you have the spirit of an eagle soaring high above all.
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Kimberly Larocca
Date: 10/31/2011 2:15:00 PM
I like that, thanks Rosalyn.
Date: 9/26/2011 2:16:00 PM
Delighted to see you posted here today Kimberly. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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Kimberly Larocca
Date: 9/28/2011 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Carol. Have a great day.

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