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A Bed of Pink Petals

One April day when spring was in the air, I stepped outside so I might relish it. I came upon a cherry tree so fair, beneath its limbs I was enticed to sit. I fell to sleep inhaling fragrant bliss - the vision of the tree still in my brain. I dreamed one sweet, pink petal, like a kiss, fell on my cheek, and soon there was a rain. . . A rain of lovely silken blossoms! Then they softly made a pile upon the ground. Warm wind embraced me; that’s the moment when I woke to pink resplendence all around! Upon a bed of petals I then lay. Inside a dream I had no need to stay! For the Dreams poetry contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2018 8:00:00 PM
Very 'dreamy' and well-written, Andrea. Congratulation on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2018 8:31:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats, Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2018 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 1/21/2018 9:41:00 PM
Lovely spin of the poem. Congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:53:00 PM
Love the ending Andrea...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful, perfect sonnet, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/28/2016 7:53:00 AM
A 7 for this perfect, WINNING sonnet, Andrea. Congrats! Janice
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Date: 9/28/2016 6:11:00 AM
Andrea- beautiful sonnet for a lovely poetess :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/19/2016 6:27:00 PM
A beautiful poem congrats on your win
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:40:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Andrea! I love cherry blossoms! Congrats on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 7/16/2016 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful dream drawn with beautiful imagination. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
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Date: 7/16/2016 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Andrea--a 7. Janice
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:25:00 AM
Andrea, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:05:00 AM
This was nice Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:53:00 PM
This is such a good poem Andrea, You just keep pumping out the winners. Nice win...Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/14/2013 7:53:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea. Beautiful, as is all your work
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:45:00 PM
nice win....PD
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:23:00 AM
What a lovely dream..just like you...congrats. BG
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Date: 12/13/2013 11:13:00 AM
I get such a feeling of warmth and peace reading your wonderful poem. All so well depicted. Congrats on your win too.
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Date: 12/13/2013 9:20:00 AM
Andrea,my sincere thanks for your support. I thought only nette and Dr.Mehta are the big poets contributing and was little careless.Next time i would sit with some solid parameters to evaluate.Your poem is really great.I really enjoyed reading this poem.wonderful,awesome.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 12/13/2013 8:22:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem nature, Congrats, Andrea
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Date: 4/23/2013 4:46:00 PM
This is beautiful--wishing I was beneath a tree with buds on it. Snow is going fairly quick today as it is above 0 for a change. Spring is maybe on it's way. love phyl
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Date: 4/22/2013 5:24:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 4/21/2013 1:45:00 AM
I missed to read this wonderful sonnet and congrats you on your win. Though it's late, I am giving now. Great congrats, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/16/2013 1:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Get a message for you in Debbie's blog. ~A.O
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