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A Bed of Nails

Life is like a bed of nails. Just about the time you think you can rest, someone comes along to steal your nest. Just about the time you think you'll make it, someone comes along to take it. And when you think you'll slow down a bit, someone brings you a load of ****! Then you think you've found "the one", just to find out it was just for fun. Why is it always true that trouble seems to stick like glue? And no matter what you do it inevitably comes back to you. So don't sleep too long or too sound 'cause trouble's always hanging 'round. Stay alert and sleep light, and always be ready to fight! By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 2017 "All Rights Reserved"

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Date: 2/1/2017 11:57:00 PM
You did too! Well done escaping the soup police! Funny too!
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Carole Duet
Date: 2/2/2017 11:46:00 PM
Thanks Budgie! ;-)
Date: 12/13/2016 6:14:00 PM
Trouble would have to wait until I get my beauty rest. Good poem -JT
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Carole Duet
Date: 12/14/2016 6:17:00 PM
Hello, Honestly! Thanks for reading my poem and commenting. And, yes, life can take a toll on your beauty sometimes. Carole
Date: 9/23/2016 10:56:00 PM
typos! I really meant: It put me right back in the times when I also was not so lucky in love.
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/28/2016 2:43:00 AM
Yes, John, I surely know what you mean. And, thank you so much for commenting.
Date: 9/23/2016 10:53:00 PM
it put me right back in the times when I also. So lucky in love.
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Date: 8/16/2016 1:12:00 PM
cool write, u have a way of writing about reality, right one, but found it was just for there fun,
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Date: 8/3/2016 9:50:00 AM
Unfortunately I think you're right about this! lol Good job, Carole!
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Date: 8/3/2016 5:02:00 AM
Very nice ... Great humour ...
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Date: 8/3/2016 2:49:00 AM
Good job of venting, Carole - I enjoyed the read ... CayCay
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Date: 8/3/2016 2:25:00 AM
Think I'd rather have a bed of roses in life but sadly life isn't like that lol -good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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