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A Beach Spa For My Feet

I push my feet blissfully 
into smooth sun-kissed grains of sand.
Taking my feet abruptly from their fun,
 down to the shore I run.
Warm briny sea caresses them; 
they splash like happy children.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/10/2018 11:53:00 PM

You make it sound sooooo inviting. congrats on your win Andrea, great 3 lines.

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 6/8/2018 11:06:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for this vivid and real description of a fun experience at the beach! It takes me right to the edge of the water. Congratulations on your win with this fine piece, my friend! All good things to you and your family! :) Bartholomew

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 6/8/2018 7:04:00 AM

Oh man. Toes in the sand seaside right now would be a dream! Thoroughly enjoyed this Andrea. Congrats on your win! xomo :)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 6/8/2018 6:57:00 AM

Andrea, your three lines made me want to jump in my car and head for Hilton Head, or Myrtle Beach, or Tybee Island........ Congratulations on your win!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/8/2018 1:05:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Sea is a fantastic thing.

Natasha Turner

Date: 6/7/2018 11:15:00 PM

Really nice..congrats :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2018 9:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win :) great write, Andrea. Hugs Eve

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/7/2018 8:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I'd dearly love to be on a beach , splashes in the water and walking in the sand.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/7/2018 3:52:00 PM

Congrats on this fun and lovely win in the contest...All the best...Charlie

Joseph May

Date: 6/7/2018 1:34:00 PM

Lovely write Andrea...Congrats on your win..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2018 1:01:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2018 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Andrea :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/7/2018 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea. Tom

Silent One

Date: 6/7/2018 12:27:00 PM

Love that last line Andrea.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Robin Davis

Date: 5/31/2014 9:32:00 PM

Andrea The beach, warm weather, squishy sand and bare feet. What else could be better. Thank you for the nice comment on my Mermaid poem. Hugs

Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 8:14:00 PM

i like this one... . Hugs* SKAT

Joseph May

Date: 1/7/2014 7:26:00 PM

the sweet caress of ocean waves...congrats on your win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/7/2014 10:05:00 AM

Andrea, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/24/2013 9:19:00 AM

Liked the happy children line. It's too adorable to think of your toes as "tiny you's"... hahaha... I ADORE the beach (though I live a ten hour drive away from it)... *sigh*