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A Soul Awakened

Back then No den Right here sound clear Back then No pen Right here Great share Back then Not ten Right here I rear Dear zone I own This soul Make roll Rise soul My soul.

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 4/21/2013 1:57:00 PM

Original and lovely!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/18/2013 11:39:00 AM

I really liked how you used a series of footles and then ended it with "rise soul/my soul"-- a very inspiring read! Thank you for passing by my poem :)!

Terry Burns

Date: 4/17/2013 4:34:00 PM

Good poem Abdul, Enjoyed it much. Thanks for your comment on my O'er The Battlements I do Roam.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2013 1:23:00 PM

Woooow it is good !!! - Well done A.O. - I have never written a footle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/17/2013 1:07:00 PM

nice footle Abdulafeez, well done I enjoyed these xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2013 9:32:00 AM

ooo wow,, I like your footle poem... I like the back then and no den.. love the awakening of you. blessing.. And thank you very much for the note on Debbie's blog. hugs and more hugs... xox~ Linda

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 4/17/2013 9:04:00 AM

Wow, this is a simple poem but really full with quality, you give a perfect simplicity through your straight forward words, enjoyed to read this refreshing write of you :) wishing you a wonderful day there and thank you for reading and commenting my stuff back then :p hug Yanny

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/17/2013 8:39:00 AM

I've never tried writing a footle, but I've read some pretty amazing ones on the Soup. This one is interesting, and it's strange how choppy, yet flowing it is. Back then, no pen, right here, great share << I get what you're saying there. When I first started writing it took me several months to finally start sharing my work with anyone... but it's an incredible feeling to share and let your voice be heard.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2013 8:08:00 AM

I like this one, well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2013 5:02:00 PM

these were interesting to read! It's nice to see you experimenting with the footle form!