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A River of Hot , Hot Love

A River of Hot , Hot Love Cool blue love water quenching dry earthly thirst others had tried but precious you were the first Standing there in your low cut top and blue jeans so tight and breasts radiating like bright sunbeams Quickly my wish finally came flying right into my arms crashed so deeply into your beauty and sexual charms Love currents flowing like white water's very rapid rise heat surging like burning suns in many clear blue skies Reaching out to slowly pull your sexy body next to mine you engulfing me like a lush, pretty tree wrapped vine Cried our spirits out in loving moans of fiery ecstasy hot, hot love ever so steamy and ever so damn crazy! Together drowned in a splashing , crashing river of love pressing , intimately touching to squeeze every drop of Passion so deep the night sky extends down its lover's cloak treasure sweetly found on that last caressing final stroke Satisfaction exploding in our bodies and sweet final cries each falling asleep with joyous tears still wet in our eyes! Robert L. 05-22-2014

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Date: 5/23/2014 10:50:00 PM
I find this poem less like sexy but more like artistic just like the way photography differs from pornography. I see the images as an artistic garland of photographs that goes beyond bodily pleasure. It's actually more of a spiritual experience. Great work, Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/24/2014 12:47:00 AM
Thanks my friend! I had hope that the artistic implications came shining forth. Good to see that hope bear fruit!
Date: 5/23/2014 6:58:00 AM
You excellently captured the essence of loving sensuality, my friend - you have to feel it to write it! YES - Excellent write!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/23/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thanks much for commenting. Spoken like one that also knows that truly great passion is also very, very truly intense!
Date: 5/22/2014 10:42:00 PM
wow, that is one sexy poem!!! STEAMY!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/22/2014 10:49:00 PM
Thanks , had to add the spice that makes the world dance!!
Date: 5/22/2014 9:24:00 PM
Oh my Robert..how risque... Well done...Tim
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/22/2014 10:09:00 PM
Thanks much , wrote it for a contest then withdraw it in favor of a previous write of mine.

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