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Mountain melt trickles a pure innocence ever closer to her fluent destiny with each lingering kiss from the sun Wooded embankments overflow the ancient river starts to grow and faster and faster she pushes her way downstream Here is where you'll find me on the side of the bend at the base of a mighty oak arising from a seed splashes falling all around quenching my need my need to be free pushing me to bloom Here is where you'll find me growing if only for you waiting patiently for your soft touch hoping your wings might brush beside me as you momentarily flutter by hoping you take a little peek inside of me inside the place I carry the fruits that nourish life for generations to flourish and for happiness to thrive Here is where I'll stand in the sun and in the night watching over you and your glorious flight swaying with the summer breeze brightening up the bend and being true to the ever end

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Date: 8/27/2016 6:57:00 AM
Tim, a first-rate composition. I love it. The imagery is lush, and the message is magnificent. Bravo!
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Date: 8/3/2016 5:21:00 PM
Hi Tim , conhratulations also from me. You sure have written a lot I see. Looks like I found you. I too live vlose to nature. I am a sucker for it. Nice write
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Date: 7/31/2016 4:03:00 PM
I'm glad to have found this flower at the summit. Congratulations on the placement.
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:51:00 PM
Oh Tim, this poem is so beautiful it captured my heart and brought tears to my eyes. You truly own a poet's soul. I am faving this beauty! Congratulations on a well deserved first place! 7 ; ) I hope this becomes POTD!
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:45:00 PM
Tim,, congratulations on your 101 in a row contest win. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:24:00 PM
I know where to find you ... at the top of the list lol many congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/28/2016 12:16:00 PM
Wonderful poem of destiny. A 7. Congrats on your win my friend, hugs cloudy poet
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Date: 7/28/2016 12:01:00 AM
This is a wonderful write. Congrats on your 1st place win. :) Sunita
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Date: 7/27/2016 10:28:00 PM
lovely, Tim - A winner regardless of any contest, but congrats on First Place for this flowing enthrallment ... CayCay
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:45:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "THE REAL ME." Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:01:00 AM
What a gift this poem is to all lovers of poetry Tim! #7 Congratulations on having it featured as POTW! ; )
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:50:00 AM
Hi Tim: A truly well written personal poem My compliments!
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on POTW!
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.w., Tim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/8/2016 8:31:00 AM
Tim, a big congratulations on Poem of the Week with this amazing write, enjoy the honor, 7 ~
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Date: 4/6/2016 1:25:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 4/4/2016 3:02:00 PM
A mighty poem. Congratulation on POTW!
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:11:00 PM
Intriguing as I read, this lovely poem of the week. Congrats to you Tim.
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Date: 4/3/2016 11:56:00 PM
Many congrats on POTW Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 6:06:00 PM
Hello, Tim... Congratulations on poem of the week. Hugs. Linda
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Date: 4/3/2016 7:48:00 AM
A masterful write Mr. Smith most worthy of POTW. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/31/2016 7:56:00 AM
Very lovely, Tim...both the personification and the imagery! #7 // paul
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Date: 3/30/2016 8:53:00 PM
Excellent write Tim
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Date: 3/30/2016 12:11:00 AM
Excellent. Very powerful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:45:00 PM
personification is great, the imagery you create is amazingly wonderful!
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:03:00 PM
That's for such a well though out comment : )
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