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White Wedding Dress

As I look around, A glorious decor Everyone sitting around, those petals on the floor Smiling faces, and wedding cake A perfect picture you and I make In black and white you stand at the altar There's no way that this day could Falter But Alas.. I wake up to know that my dream is a Nightmare To see you with her, How could I NOT care!? To think that could have been ME at that threshold A page in my diary I SCREAM to you TENFOLD! Why me?.. I sit and I ponder what could have caused this What could I have done to ruin this bliss I stop, because from god this must be a test So I accept, I'll move on and Say goodbye to that White Wedding Dress...

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Date: 1/23/2012 12:39:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marissa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:29:00 AM
Very well written Marissa.-OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Marissa Long
Date: 1/22/2012 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Anne ^_^
Date: 1/22/2012 9:53:00 AM
Your passion and emotiond for the subject show thru.
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Marissa Long
Date: 1/22/2012 9:55:00 AM
Yes, I have strong feelings in this one..

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