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White Wedding Dress

As I look around, A glorious decor
Everyone sitting around, those petals on the floor
Smiling faces, and wedding cake
A perfect picture you and I make
In black and white you stand at the altar
There's no way that this day could Falter

But Alas..

I wake up to know that my dream is a Nightmare
To see you with her, How could I NOT care!?
To think that could have been ME at that threshold
A page in my diary I SCREAM to you TENFOLD!

Why me?..

I sit and I ponder what could have caused this
What could I have done to ruin this bliss
I stop, because from god this must be a test
So I accept, I'll move on
and Say goodbye to that White Wedding Dress...

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  1. Date: 1/23/2012 12:39:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marissa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 10:29:00 AM
    Very well written Marissa.-OXOX love Anne-Lise

    Long Avatar Marissa Long
    Date: 1/22/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne ^_^
  1. Date: 1/22/2012 9:53:00 AM
    Your passion and emotiond for the subject show thru.

    Long Avatar Marissa Long
    Date: 1/22/2012 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I have strong feelings in this one..