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Oh midnight of spring; a lustrous parade, In azure twirls enticing moonglow's array The bolder blues, the lighter teals that spark; While violets hum their notes of rhapsody. Dusk arrives with turquoise rays soon to vanish Mirroring quietude which gently floats; Till cerulean clouds lays on the fold of eve's dress After stardust pours its beads, cobalt its hue . How this moment is lost in the nip of dawn When indigo fire fades gently, the sun will rise As the hours end quickly, I dare not forget, One midnight calm of blue...never the same as this one.! Janis Thompson's Contet: The Color Blue - Revised, Old poems Too Entered 1/27/2017 /A re-post

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Date: 2/2/2017 2:37:00 PM
Great poem! Love "nip of dawn" and "quietude"! Congratulations Nette! :-)
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Date: 1/31/2017 11:30:00 PM
Awesome...congrats! :)
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Date: 1/31/2017 4:30:00 PM
Simply beautiful... Congratulations on the placement!!
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Date: 1/31/2017 1:41:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your WIN with this lovely piece!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/30/2017 8:07:00 PM
So beautiful Nette... congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 1/30/2017 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/30/2017 5:52:00 PM
many congrats on your win Nette:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/30/2017 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations nette!!!! Well done!! Big Hugggs!! Love ya! :) deb
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Date: 1/30/2017 1:04:00 PM
Great writing Nette, as always. Thanks for being in the contest and congrats.
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Date: 9/26/2016 11:13:00 AM
You are so good with words, Nette. Congrats! :-)
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:35:00 AM
Nette-I love these two colors...azure and indigo-lovely poem and congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 8:09:00 AM
Nice poem filled with lovely colours...the last line is beautiful, "never the same way as this one." - now that is the unique mystery of God's creations:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:44:00 AM
Nette, I love the many colors in your poems. Congratulations on your placement. Agnes
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your placement. I love all of the colors you used in this poem. I have seen some unforgettable dawns and dusks. Driving a truck for 25 years, Ive seen them all over the country, mountains, lakes, deserts, plains, the colors are magnificent!
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Date: 9/24/2016 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:35:00 AM
Nice win.. Linda
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:52:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/1/2016 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful shades of blue, Nette.
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Date: 3/1/2016 4:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your top-notch win, Nette. Beautiful free verse. Elaine
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Date: 3/1/2016 3:11:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Nette...Congrats on your win...And thanks for all your comments on my poems...
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:16:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 2/29/2016 4:02:00 PM
awesome, Nette. And this contest was just barely judged so I see you are on the winners' list.BIG congrats.
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:41:00 PM
Beautifully done...
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:16:00 PM
Amazing, Nette. I actually wanted to try for this contest, but its above my ability! You've done superbly well...Hugs
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Date: 2/29/2016 2:11:00 PM
Impeccable! There is something grand about twilight when spring comes. " Lapiz-lazuli, " I'm sold!
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