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Twelfth Day of Christmas

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This poem is inspired by one of my favorite happy songs for Christmas.

On the twelfth day of Christmas My true love (hubby) sent to me 12 baskets of laundry Eleven dishwashing liquids Ten laundry soaps Nine vacuum cleaners Ten frying pans Nine oven toasters Eight soft brooms Seven kitchen aprons Six sheers for mowing Five hair netsssssssssss Four dustpans Three floor scrubs Two rubber gloves And a pretty nanny for my baby Dec. 14, 2012 By Leonora Galinta Merry, Merry Christmas to All! Please sing with me;)) First Prize Contest: 12 days of X-mass Judged: 12/25/2012 Sponsor: My greatest Poet, PD/Linda

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 6:52:00 AM

Too much work LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/4/2013 2:16:00 PM

Loved your take on this amusing little contest... congratulations on your win! Happy 2013!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/29/2012 10:25:00 PM

Love this,,,, I thought I read and posted before Christmas,,,, must of been another one? Hope you had a fab Christmas,, and I do wish you a blessed New Year ;}

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/29/2012 6:18:00 PM

Good stuff Leonora, congrats are in order, blessings Carl

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/29/2012 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win,Lenora!

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2012 5:02:00 PM

congrats on a great win Leonora

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/27/2012 11:39:00 AM

Lol. Congrats Leonora. ... Seren

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 12/26/2012 2:30:00 PM

Lovely piece,Leonora...Congratulations on your super win in this contest...

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/26/2012 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on the win... Loved it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2012 12:23:00 PM

Leonora, this one just HAD to be on the list. It is marvelous. CONGRATULATIONS to the sweetest girl at Soup. Luv, Andrea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/26/2012 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations Leonora love, a super win xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2012 8:46:00 PM

Hello SIS..., ;-) Congratulations with your little Christmas win, Leo... have a nice one... always~ PD

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/25/2012 8:39:00 PM

LOL....this was great, big congrats! Merry Christmas, hope you had an amazing day filled with love and blessings! Hugs

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 12/23/2012 2:20:00 AM

enjoyed reading this lively poem....Merry Christmas to you Linda... Love Mehnaz

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2012 12:36:00 PM

Hi Leo, I'm now on my computer... not my tiny phone... hold on I've got to sing this poem all over again... at least you got the nanny for the baby... okay sis... this 12 days was fun , and thoughtful,, if you like cleaning..LOL.... I'll be here for a bit..always~PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2012 11:00:00 AM

I do not mean to be grumpy and cranky Leonora ..... But, there could have been a bit more romantic gifts ....... (?) I would trade out nanny to a very sexy gardener .... (small babies sleep both day and night.) * * * * * * * * Wishing you and your loved ones a peaceful Christmas, Leonora! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) * * * * * * * * * *

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/16/2012 2:30:00 PM

i'm singing with you right now, wonderful cheerfull poetry, love this...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/16/2012 7:22:00 AM

Thnx, Leonora, for my placement in your contest!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/15/2012 2:51:00 PM

Are we men really that clueless??? Fun poem, Get the nanny to do all the work and have fun with your baby!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2012 10:58:00 AM

this is wonderful because you did it on a theme, the husband who has no clue what a woman REALLY wants. GOod one, my friend!!

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 12/15/2012 9:59:00 AM

Lol on this one Leonora. Happy Holidays, Connie

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/15/2012 9:00:00 AM

Very nice Leo. I could do without the pretty nanny. Merry christmas. Lucilla

Len Gasun
Date: 12/15/2012 9:20:00 AM

lol, but my true love wants her to stay and i'll be doing a bigger job ;). well, the story is just a part of creativity ;) lol. Merry, merry Christmas to you and to all here, thank you so much for singing with me in my Christmas fantasy song ;)

Rollo West

Date: 12/14/2012 11:16:00 AM

Hi Leonora, what a great write this is, really enjoyed reading it. Rollo

David Williams

Date: 12/14/2012 11:08:00 AM

Leonora ha ha ha well done I like...David

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/14/2012 9:16:00 AM

a very beautiful Christmas gift from your hubby? (^_^) I sing it before I sleep this minute...Good luck in the contest..wishing you a very Merry Christmas :) mwuah!!!!!!!!!!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/15/2012 9:22:00 AM

wishawishawish;)