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' To Be Holy-Clean ... '

I Bathed My Body Perfumed My Soul Body and Soul – All Aglow I Washed My Mind Prepared My Heart Made Grime and Crime Depart … I’m As Pure, As An Impure-Girl Can Be I’m Clean, As Far As The Eye Can See But I’m Stuck, In The Soil Of Humanity And You Said, What’s Yours, Must Be Holy … I’ve Swept Away Dirty Dust, Won’t Settle On Me Mopped and Polished My Humility No (Lye)-Soap, But Suds I, Tin-Washboard-Rubbed My Sins, Clorox-Soaked and Scrubbed … Tonight, It’s Time For Another Bath Smog, Plus Fog-Sweat, Well … Do The Math Daily, My Fault, Ain’t Far From My Path Tub-Baptized, ‘Cause Stink, Only Raises Wrath … I, Talcum-Powder, Self-Inflicted-Bruises Massage Away, Comfort-Zone-Excuses and Rest On Silk Sheets: No Abuses, Nor Wild-Deuces … Lotion On Sand-Grain, Pained-Shoulder Put Soothing Aloe-Oil, Yet Stain Spilt-Over ‘ Son Of Man ’, Came and Used Stain-Remover … My Window-Sights, Clear For Clarity My Hair and Hands, Shining-Sanitary-Vanity) When Vacuumed, I’m Spotless, Not Bare-Empty I’m Hygienic, Jasmine-Scented, Please Remain In Me I’m As Pure, As An Impure-Girl Can Be I’m Clean, As Far As The Eye Can See But I’m Stuck, In The Soil Of Humanity (My Spirit Is Willing … But My Flesh Is Weak) And You Said, What’s Yours, Must Be Holy …

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Date: 11/20/2009 7:10:00 PM
MoonBee this is an explosive poem and i luv luv luv it ..stuck in the soil of humanity... are we not all at times.. your use of words is so gifted and this is going to my favs tonight... I also luv the acrostic poem Carol Brown wrote 4 u... terrific and well deserved... keep sharing these lovlies with us... blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:33:00 PM
Hi MoonBee, hope your well! This poem is beautifully written, rhyming is witty. I like that "but stuck in the soil of humanity". Just an awesome verse all in all, MoonBee. Beautiful job, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/15/2009 4:20:00 AM
Very well written Canady! I feel like taking a bath now! I hope I scrub up as well as you! love Simone
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