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The candle burns down long into the night Its life waning in a flickering flame As I etch these ink stains of black on white On pages that will never be the same For I will fill this empty space with gold Treasures - my soul now feels the need to share Before the embers in this fire grow cold I give to you these precious gems so rare And when this candle dies and darkness falls My pen will finally rest without regret Left with the knowledge that I gave it all My life in words until my dying breath And in death I will live forevermore For the pen is mightier than the sword ~~~~~ Written: April 15, 2011 Elaine Cecelia Geroge, of Canada The Famous quotation 'The pen is mightier than the sword' was written by: Edward Buliver-Lytton in 1839. Those words still live on today, proving that the pen truly is, mightier than the sword. First place: Brian Strand's 14 line contest First place: Razzle Dazzle Contest sponsored by Linda-Marie

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Date: 5/29/2014 2:15:00 PM
Wow!!! This truly is great..:) I remember this as it is very true in Phil history..:) as the writes of the poets and all arouse much more heroes..:) congratulations..:)
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:29:00 PM
Aah hah!! well put Indeed laine real pleasure to read today.."
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:19:00 PM
What a great achievement for a true poet: all three poems getting chosen for the next round, dear Elaine!!! Congratulations and thank you for you comment! Love, iolanda
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:54:00 PM
Nicely penned piece. Yes, the pen is mightier than the sword! Robert.
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Lainie on your three poems being selected for the first round, another gem. Best to you~ Caryl
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congrats to you too darling friend and good luck. Have been trying to leave here, as I feel so guilty taking up space when I am not active,however, wrote to PS while they were having trouble, so not sure they received my mail. I can always rejoin. Just keep thinking I am going to make it back here and it never quite happens. Anyway, love and hugs and all good things to you my friend, shar xoxoxo
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations Elaine on your three poems capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:05:00 PM
I love sonnets Elaine and you did justice with this one. Last two lines are awesome
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:40:00 PM
Yes, this is close to my very favourite, but then its you, isn't it... the writer. beautiful... but still love the violin. Cheers! Lee
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Date: 7/16/2011 7:05:00 AM
What an excellent write my friend. Beautifully said. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:02:00 AM
Beautifully written, I believe your words speak to many of us, thank you...luv shannon
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:07:00 AM
Amazing as always Lainie. Congratulations on your win my dear friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:38:00 PM
sonnet writing at its best, my dear!! Congrats, belatedly!!
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on you first place win
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:59:00 AM
Simply wonderful, dear Elaine!! Deserving this 1st place honor!! I'm so glad this won!! :)
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:44:00 AM
Many cograts to you Elaine. I loved this the first time i read it, and it's nice to see it win. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 6/11/2011 2:04:00 AM
This is amazing! Congrats on your well deserved first place win
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:26:00 AM
congrats, elaine... really toppers! :) huggs
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:22:00 AM
think i was jealous that time hahaha! how can i forget to congratulate you on this well deserv'd win dear Elaine. thats a beautiful poem, very creatively expressed. i just realised i did not share my congrats with you a month after the contest was judged. Love!!!!!
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:23:00 PM
Dear Elaine, I love this one; it runs deep and beautiful. So glad you are giving your all - for others to enjoy - so much. Love, Jen
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Jen, for inspiring me and bringing such joy back into my life. Much love, Elaine
Date: 5/1/2011 12:03:00 AM
Very deep. Congrats on the feature of your beautiful words. DAK
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Date: 4/30/2011 4:38:00 PM
Elaine, congratulations on your featured poem. GBU my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:53:00 AM
Wonderful poem..I think I read this on lulu before ?? Congrats on being featured !! What an awesome honor among so many poets !! May your pen continue to stain the pages..Enjoyed !!!
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lainie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:55:00 AM
Congrats Lainie on your featured poem this week on P.S. a wonderful piece to share with us all my friend with luv...
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