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' the Touch of a Virgin ... '

Her Touch Was Shyly-Light Full of Purity, In His Sight Her Touch Was Soft in Timidity Almost Opposed To His Temerity Almost As If She Were Afraid To Lay Naked and Exposed, as Helpless-Prey Untouched and Untutored In Torrid-Ways His Eyes, Seemed To Say … It’s Ok … So, The Touch of The Virgin, Did Fall Her Fingertips, Fragile and Small Upon Broad Shoulders and Over All Gaining-Ground, with Each, Moist-Kiss-Call … On His Lips, His Eyes, All Over His Face From Toes, To Thighs, and Back Up, To Waist Around His Torso, Sent Shivers Up His Back Covered Every Inch, of His Manly-Track … In An Instant … It Was All Over Beneath Blanket, She Was Now ... Lover By Honeyed-Moon, They Did Glisten and Glow After The First Touch of ... Virgin Snow

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Date: 11/13/2009 12:08:00 AM
Beautiful and adrenalin charging,groin tearing write MoonBee,This poem really describes;the virgins clarion call.Off course thank U for your lovely comments,one of the best by any poet yet.Your lovely words like Wildebeest herds in droves they gently beckon,this poet here can smell you near,which means you're a lot to reckon.God Bless,PRINCE PS.You mentioned you were a long distance runner.Which distance and at what level?
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful making Love Story. One feels alive when reading this wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:02:00 AM
"Virgin Snow" WOW, nice word-play......:JP]
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Date: 11/11/2009 7:19:00 PM
Romantic and passionate, Whew! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/11/2009 5:12:00 PM
Very passionate write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:29:00 PM
Lovely poem,I love lover by honeyed-moon! love Simone
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:58:00 PM
Awesome write dear Moon Bee! A joy to read, Keep writing and I'll keep reading, smile. Have a wonderful day. Love Light Patty
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