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I Looked At The Mirror Mirror, Looked Back At Me I Asked The Mirror What Do You See ? The Mirror Smiled “Same As You See” I Touched The Mirror The Mirror, Touched Me Pressing To Break Thru Glass Vanity For Tho Eye To Eye Sometimes I See Mirror’s Right Is Left To Me And My Right Side … Made Mirror Left I Got Perplexed At Imagery And I Turned Away From Mirror And Mirror Turned From Me Our Backs To Each Other Exposed Rigidly But, Both Turned Back To Face And Touch Same Place, And Be Contained and Content In Each Other’s Space Respectfully We Shattered The Barrier Between Mirror and Me Back To Reflecting Our World And The Same Things, We See … Oh … Mirror, Mirror … Reflecting You and Seeing Me …

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Date: 12/6/2009 5:55:00 PM
The psychology of self is not easy to capture for its the psychology of present and reality ... when reality does not stand still ... but this poem showed dexterity of will, and sings beyond the mirror's pane.
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:09:00 AM
Oh Moon, Can it Bee,the mirror doth want to see you free... above the knee?Mooooonbbbbbeeee..... you poetess of mirth,some great poet touched you at your moment of birth.Thanks for Da comments they are as usual sweet as honey and stinging as the bee.God Bless...PRINCE
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Date: 11/28/2009 8:13:00 PM
luv luv luv this one MoonBee .. u sure are unique .. and inventive ... great write... enjoyed... luv... Linda-Marie, "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/28/2009 2:43:00 AM
Great poem, I like your style, love Simone
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Date: 11/27/2009 6:33:00 PM
You just keep gettin' better and better! - This one is a true (and beautiful) mind blower! - Tim
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