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The Knights Reward-The Sequel To Redemption Knight

Dragon slain, all set aright Maiden held in arms so tight His blue eyes saw future bright They reached the castle by night Bathed and dressed in virgin white To bedchamber she did alight He was moved and moaned outright Suppressed passion did ignite He forgot what to recite Every word had taken flight How she glowed in candle light He tried to temper his might With each caress ever slight He raised her to wondrous height The night shimmered with delight Heaven burst upon her sight How her body did excite He loved her through day and night Hopes and dreams she did incite T’was she who had saved the knight Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/17/2019 10:08:00 AM

Wow where has the time gone? I had to read the sequel as well.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2013 9:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this poem and the fun comments again. I finished the Watch poem Eileen.

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/11/2013 7:48:00 PM

my personal opinion, this is better than the last, its what every armour knight wants only a few could reach it.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/12/2013 10:19:00 AM

WOW! Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it. Actually, this was a part of the first one, but the change of rhyme begged for it to be a poem on its own! Thanks for the visit, my dear!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2013 7:11:00 AM

Very captivating story told in poetic form..Great maiden to save the knight..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2013 7:57:00 AM

:) Yes....it's good for a change for the woman to get the credit, isn't it, Sara? After all....we do influence our men to great victories. Thanks for the visit! :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/5/2013 6:00:00 AM

They certainly knew how to live and love in those days, Oh lucky Knight haha. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2013 11:00:00 AM

Richard.....Yes...you ARE king. Guess they get the better deal...they don't have to FIGHT for the damsels...they just order one up! You are naughty....always...naughty! Or am I reading into this! Damsels are a plenty...but the sweet, beautiful, caring, and enchanting kind are an endangered species...WHO WILL SAVE US! HA HA HA HA HA HA! ;) You're king...get the ball rolling....(oh dear...)

Richard D Seal
Date: 8/5/2013 2:17:00 PM

Yes I know, Knights are getting scarce, can hardly find enough to fill my round table lol :) maybe there's not sufficient damsels to go round !!!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2013 7:59:00 AM

GRRRRRRR....You have returned from YOUR travles to far off kingdoms! Yes...laptop IS on my lap! ;) Jiggle jiggle

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2013 7:58:00 AM

Mr Seal....you have returned from our travels to FAR OFF KINGDOMS! :) Glad to have you back. It is the damsel who is lucky enough to have a man fight to death to win her heart, hand, and soul....Knights are an endangered species me thinks! What say you?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/4/2013 8:03:00 AM

Ha ha you kill me, the knight must be exhausted. They say once a king always a king. Once a knight is enough. Thanks for taking my suggestion. Enjoyed the sequel.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/5/2013 8:00:00 AM

WOW! It is a rare man indeed who can admit that! :) You KNOW it's true! :) Warrior Princess mode switched ON!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2013 8:06:00 PM

Ha, ha, I agree women rule!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/4/2013 8:21:00 AM

Once a knight is enough? Really???? How about we sing with Lionel Richie..."All KNIGHT long..." ;)....and day and knight and day again.....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/4/2013 8:19:00 AM

Yes...thank you for your suggestions! I got two poems instead of one! Double the fun! Double the pleasure! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/4/2013 8:17:00 AM

Oh RIchard....there you go being all practical again....Yes....he is a knight who never tires.....a knight who is larger than life......a knight whose prowess is beyond imagination! HA HA! It's my dream, remember? Oh...no no no...here is the deal...it's the maiden...the damsel...the piece of heaven he's rescued that brings all that out in him! ;) YES!!! WOMEN RULE!