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The Factory Garden

This quaint haven away from Seeing Eye No sound of the loom now at nature’s call Here on this coarse park bench in deepest fall Gloomy clouds above threatening blue sky. Song of the Blackbird rings out yet so shy Speckled Thrush nags his mate in tuneful squall Lush green lawn an ocean of food to trawl Twisting squirming succulents soon to die. I now will have to end this little verse Clown on a motor mower not at peace Feathered friends scatter to a higher place I look to heaven now in silent curse Back to the weaving shed and all that grease Lunch break in tatters silence without trace. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Date: 6/19/2022 9:46:00 PM
Wow, and an Italian sonnet, too. This is very well-crafted, Harry. Feathered friends scatter to a higher place, cool images. Clown on a motor mower, nice surprise image!
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Date: 6/19/2022 12:57:00 PM
Simply soulful sweetness amid lifes drive Of factory pace no Doubt, well done Harry ' Enjoyed this older post of yours!
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Date: 11/25/2013 4:57:00 AM
very belated congratulations Harry it is now on my home page xx
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Date: 10/24/2012 7:58:00 AM
Belated congrats on your win in my contest, Harry! Though I put up my blog (which takes me hours) I always PLAN to revisit the pages of the winners. So glad I came here once again this morning. This reminded me so of my grandfather, by the by. He worked in a factory all his life, working with sheeted metal. He used to bring those little parafin tins and heat up his lunch then make some tea for himself. Hugs to you :)
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Date: 10/18/2012 11:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Great idea for a factory to have a garden spot for the help to enjoy...Sara
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:48:00 AM
WARM CONGRATS HARRY LUV ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN .. ALWAYS AMAZING MY FRIEND
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:09:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive sonnet - congratulations.
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:09:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive sonnet - congratulations.
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:54:00 AM
congrats on a great win Harry
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your 9th place win in Cyndi's contest Harry. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 7/10/2010 1:15:00 AM
I really like this piece, it seems so inclusive and mysterious as to what all you are speaking about, I love it, nice work!
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Date: 6/25/2010 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Italian Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:32:00 PM
Harry, I see you did precisley a traditional Italian sonnet, down to the finest detail of syllable count per line. Also, this is a very interesting and different theme you presented from the usual. I would personally rate this one as "top notch" Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Harry, on 7th place in my Italian Sonnet Contest, with this beautiful poem.. love Constance
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:19:00 PM
Soup mail...
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:36:00 AM
Interesting wrie, Harry and well written and nice imagery! thank you for commenting "The Great Oil Spill". it is horrible to learn that this spill could go on for years!!!...Have agreat Sunday!...Gert
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Date: 6/18/2010 1:16:00 PM
Hey harry, I really enjoyed the imagery you painted in this sonnet. Grat job! -Mike
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Date: 6/18/2010 2:49:00 AM
Interesting write...Hope that you got to enjoy most of your lunch break..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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