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Sweet Seduction- Swap Quatrain

Like summer breeze with sweet caress Her beauty does indeed impress And her dulcet perfume does tease With sweet caress like summer breeze In the moonlight my heart flutters "I love you" is what I utter Her perfume fills me with delight My heart flutters in the moonlight Upon her lips I plant a kiss 'Neath starry skies I am in bliss As I caress her lovely hips I plant a kiss upon her lips Forevermore she'll be my pearl A dance of love as hearts do swirl She's the one I'll always adore She'll be my pearl forevermore

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2014 5:53:00 PM

sweet seduction very sweetly done, Joseph. Congrats for your win in my contest!

Joseph May
Date: 3/9/2014 9:14:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Andrea

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2014 10:24:00 AM

It seems we both have pearls on our mind. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2014 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, joseph

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2014 3:06:00 AM

ohhh, romance and passion!.. ..sweet 'grads on your award, joseph!.. huggs

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 3/9/2014 1:36:00 AM

A great work you did here , congrats Joseph.

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/5/2014 9:17:00 PM

Mice romantic glow to this work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/27/2014 6:52:00 PM

I find these are really a challenge to write and have them flow smoothly. You did a wonderful job of creating a poem that not only flows smoothly but is romantic and filled with enchantment. Bravo Joseph!