Summer Bliss

drifting on a summer breeze, my thoughts flutter where butterflies find bliss above the clouds

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 9:02:00 AM

This is delightfully sweet, Joseph! I see that you stayed very loyal to Rick's original poem. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/5/2016 1:43:00 PM

Congrats Joseph to enjoy Summer and to win

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2016 11:08:00 PM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 5:39:00 PM

I really liked this one, as you know. Wish it had scored higher. congrats on win.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/4/2016 3:57:00 AM

Excellent. Very descriptive write. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2016 3:46:00 PM

yes, Joseph, the flashing amber would be awesome super late at night!! this is a sweet tanka. I wish he had told us if he prefers traditional tanka form or not. I went to see a sample of his own work and he was going by old standards.

Joseph May
Date: 8/3/2016 7:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea...wasn't sure either but I went the modern...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/2/2016 9:16:00 PM

so very pretty - I'm quite sure my thoughts have fluttered there to, isn't it great? love your tanka, Joseph ... CayCay

Joseph May
Date: 8/3/2016 6:56:00 PM

Thank you CayCay