Smell of Night

smell of night stardust is dispersing baby sleeps baby sleeps stardust is dispersing smell of night mirror haiku Copyright (C) Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 13 November, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2014 9:32:00 PM

oh so this is mirror haiku!! One thing to improve it. Say "stardust is dispersing!"

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/14/2014 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Andrea dear , this sounds better, and it is the correct use. I am making the change. Love XXXX rajat

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2014 3:18:00 PM

Good Mirror Haiku, Rajat. this is a seven form me :) eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/14/2014 7:17:00 AM

Love Eve, have a nice weekend. XXXX rajat

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2014 11:34:00 AM

Whichever way it reads, it still makes for a very good write! I like the serenity that it emits. // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/14/2014 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I experimented with this one. Love XXXX rajat

David Meade

Date: 11/13/2014 8:55:00 AM

When the baby sleeps -- all is good!! Nicely done my friend.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/13/2014 9:20:00 AM

Thank you David for your excellent comment on my poem...Love XXXXX RAJAT

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2014 8:40:00 AM

lovely write Ravi:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/13/2014 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Jan, Love XXXX rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/13/2014 9:20:00 AM