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Shipwreck

The able gave it a generously long wink as if they did not think resulting in the captain`s sharp stink While down went the clueless ship with the rich captain`s poor sheep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/12/2012 8:03:00 AM
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Ndaba Sibanda
Date: 12/12/2012 2:34:00 PM
"Soup mail". At first those two words did not make sense to me. However, it did not take me time to realise that the above piece has very little, if at all, to do with the terzanelle form. Now please help me welcome....The Victim In Disguise!

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