Share My Love

******************************************************************* Come and share my love, I’ll give you all of me Offer everything I am Give it graciously Come and share my love I want to lose myself Surrender everything I own Until I have nothing left Come and share my love Let’s lay the night away As I wrap my warmth around you Until dawn, turns to day Come and share my love Like you’ve been yearning to do Your every wish is my command I will submit to you Chiquita Chiamaka Baity ****************************************************************

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Roman Chebukin

Date: 9/18/2011 1:29:00 AM

i like how you put the title of the poem in every starting sentence. that was dope. i loved it reading it.

Saurabh Gupta

Date: 8/16/2011 12:06:00 PM

really sensuous..........lovely write....

Gary Fields

Date: 8/7/2011 10:37:00 PM

Risky, Risky,Risky but commendable.... I love it when a good love happen's and it doe's have it's place. But remember that love is personal and your's to feel what you like even if it dosen't pan out. Even if he is a jerk, do not let him tak your love away, it's your's..... Let this be a lesson to ya! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Chiquitachiamaka Baity
Date: 8/7/2011 11:30:00 PM

Some Risk are worth taking...lol

Rockman Pritts

Date: 8/6/2011 1:37:00 AM

WOW!! That's what every man longs to hear. You sure do know how to raise an interest. Your lips breed intoxicating words cultivated from a fertile mind that is littered with sensuality. It was certainly a pleasure to read. WHEW!! Thanks again. Rockman :-)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 8/5/2011 2:37:00 PM

when there is true love, there is true relaxation of mind... i wish you the best baby, in your-love life.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/5/2011 7:52:00 AM

Chiquita, yet another poetic delight dear poet ! Yet, about your form listed; never use the form; "I do not know", just my suggestion Chiquita. My suggestion is, to use the form; 'Free Verse', or, 'Romanticisim'. Look them up on, 'Forms of poetry' on the left of your window here. Oh, I for sure am enjoying your poetic talent ! Until later ! Much love, james

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2011 2:19:00 AM

I love the poem! Completes the story, wonderfully crafted!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/5/2011 12:01:00 AM

Sounds like a great way to go ( if you have the strength)!

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/4/2011 11:46:00 PM

WOW, another sizzler yikes!