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Shades of Twilight

Palm trees lean into purple skies, As sun finds rest beyond the seas. Glittering waves wear a golden disguise As dusky shades, with peaceful ease, Fall like a feather, on a gentle breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/8/2016 5:01:00 PM
Such lovely imagery, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. Sandras
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:13:00 PM
Just came to say hello. I think I am all caught up on all your poems. HOpe you had a lovely weekend!
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:00:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Sara....
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Date: 7/1/2015 3:44:00 PM
meter, sound, and rhyme are all perfect. Imagery is crystal clear. Not to mention the alliteration throughout (I'm a sucker for it). This is a well-deserved win, Jopseph!
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:49:00 PM
Joseph Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:05:00 AM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. I read your wonderful work and found it of superb quality. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Date: 6/29/2015 10:35:00 PM
coming back again to say this was a well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:37:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/17/2015 10:57:00 PM
Very pretty. The first two lines are unique and so beautiful.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...hugs
Date: 6/13/2015 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful visuals, and very relaxing. Nice job, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2015 7:07:00 AM
Thank you Preston

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