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Seashells' Trance

It was almost like a summer ritual To prance along the brightened shores of grain, When balmy trees wafted as usual Aunt Em’s hut glazed nearby lakeside's terrain. Waxed seashells rose like buffed pods on the ground, Dotted and curved, echoing of hummed waves played As we gathered them on coast walks, spellbound The array of tinseled humps were engraved And strung together into bright marble charms. While Aunt and I giggled, skirts fluttered on air Knitting loops as bracelets on tanned forearms, An enchantment draped by August’s fanfare. …I revel now at the trance of seashells’ gifts my childhood heart nestling magic that uplifts! Story Poem Contest, Carol Eastman Written by: nette onclaud

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Date: 6/27/2014 12:48:00 PM
When I was a kid, I loved to walk along the lakeshore and collect seashells, too. This poem brought back to me those warm memories of summertime.... I really enjoyed this wonderful write, Nette! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:34:00 PM
Hi Nette, I enjoyed this magical, well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:31:00 PM
Congrats, Nette on a great win with such beautiful childhood memories.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful Summery images abound 'Princess Nette' with family old and new enjoying nature as it should be, safe and free. You are indeed a delightful Poetess, James :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:14:00 PM
nette, awesome poem.............SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:40:00 AM
An excellent poem expressing admiration of the amazing beauty of nature my dear friend Nette! My biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! Cheers & hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/29/2013 9:00:00 PM
You must have been a delightful child. I so enjoyed your winning poem.
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:34:00 PM
this one is so beautiful...it reminded me of my own childhood and all the shells painted and worn....thanks for the trip down memory lane and congrats on your first place win :)
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Date: 9/29/2013 5:32:00 PM
This was perfectly lovely, Nette! Congratulations!!
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for your poem. It was beautiful and definitely deserved recognition. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 9/2/2013 9:19:00 PM
A beautiful memory from the Phillippines! Thanks Nette!
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:15:00 PM
How heart-warming!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this! What a beautiful environment you created!
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Date: 9/2/2013 1:14:00 PM
Beautiful Sonnet here Nette!Enjoyed a lot.
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Kash Poet
Date: 9/2/2013 1:33:00 PM
Hugggsss!!
Date: 9/2/2013 4:55:00 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/1/2013 9:29:00 PM
Sweet beautiful memories and lovely written....thanks for the name donns nette..I've never had a nickname before..makes me feel liked....:-)
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Date: 9/1/2013 6:31:00 PM
Those are some very sentimental memories you have Nette, they will be with you always! And these thoughts of seashells will always be a part of you and you have imparted some of that feel onto me by your glorious poem here my friend! Thank you for sharing this illustrious and fantastic write! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/1/2013 4:28:00 PM
aw..how beautiful these childhood memories..I love sea shells and this penned beauty
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work.Reads like you and your aunt enjoyed playing on the beach..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/1/2013 3:32:00 PM
Thanks for the vists to my page..Sara

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