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Scenario of the 1st Intercourse

/scene I/ He lay down with exhaustion that has not been named, also someone next to him as strange as the exhaustion “Eve? Eve? Is it true God has mentioned the name in heaven? /scene II/ Someone that lay with closed eyes beside him. Seems so peacefull: “but, what is the pulse in my chest, is also in that chest? In that chest? Things tremble in my groin, is it also in that groin? Yes, there?” The one lay with eyes closed next to him, actually hasn’t asleep yet. She was doubt, afraid that it was demon’s work. She really needs to be heard. Her heart whispering: “Adam, I don’t really regret for being sent away from heaven.” /scene III/ But, there is something that he has’s realize in heaven, when he touched the same bare body. Yes, there is something that has not been sense in heaven, when he stare at the same fascinating eyes. /scene IV/ The sky still purple, dawn is very young. The leaf of heart still keep lunar light’s magic. Strange coldness at the time, demanding The two body finally complete the first intercourse on earth. After so different along the night, demanding. On the grass, cannot differ, which are sweat, which are dew, wich are other liquids. “God, where are Thou last night?”

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:41:00 AM
HASAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:58:00 PM
Hasan, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:47:00 AM
This is a nice concept, how you arrange the words and the scenes. :) Are you the same Hasan Asphani... I think I've heard of you from a blog.
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