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Power of Vortex

If soul of universe is Ultimate essence of cosmic abyss If beyond hand designing universe laws it is There might actually be divine bliss Universe is strong without the soul Even if limited by control Control Of laws that my soul do not consol But vortex is a portal To a place immortal However it is not God of the bible Rather echoing universe spiral Vortex expands towards infinite abyss If it is reflection of bliss Of vortex that is To soul of universe what vortex to basic universe is? If first is ability to write Second is consciousness in all its light What third stage bring might And at the end of this road would there be divine light But independent of consciousness is time Yet do cosmic laws design time If so and beyond the hand behind those laws is universes’ soul Wouldn’t it be beyond any consciousness at all? But then vortex that is To universes’ soul what basic vortex is To universe when without soul it is The power of that vortex sublime and divine is

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Date: 11/10/2015 1:47:00 PM
I love the way the last line of each stanza leaves you hanging. It's an incredible rhythm Patrycjusz. Well done.
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