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In honor of all old and new words written history is recorded proclaiming a writer wrong thou shall not do ~ Through differences embraced With love and good taste keep judgment to self where it belongs ~

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/10/2013 12:00:00 AM

What if it is self-evident that the writer is wrong? Enjoyed the read

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/10/2013 12:34:00 PM

Great point , I can only say , I know ..I could edit forever ..sometimes writing a poem during the day , on break , having to come back to it later.. I love help if asked for or suggested in a nice way ! Example ..Craig Cornish , e-mailed me and after I wrote on his poem about "Sofonsia " I wrote a poem also. He read , said "love IT !! " then suggested a simple word , "Thine " I was looking for that word in my mind all day ! when the person becomes a Teacher and not so much a critic :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/28/2013 9:18:00 PM

I loved this one!!

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/28/2013 10:03:00 PM

Thank-you my sweet friend ! sometimes better less said !

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi

Date: 9/28/2013 3:06:00 PM

Kelly....this is good write...thanks for stopping by on my page.

Shanity Rain
Date: 9/28/2013 3:46:00 PM

Thank-you ! you are a good poet ~