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poems old and new


             In honor of all old and new
             words written history is recorded
              proclaiming a writer wrong 
                  thou shall not do ~

             Through differences embraced
               With love and good taste
                 keep judgment to self
                     where it belongs ~

              

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:00:00 AM
    What if it is self-evident that the writer is wrong? Enjoyed the read

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 10/10/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great point , I can only say , I know ..I could edit forever ..sometimes writing a poem during the day , on break , having to come back to it later.. I love help if asked for or suggested in a nice way ! Example ..Craig Cornish , e-mailed me and after I wrote on his poem about "Sofonsia " I wrote a poem also. He read , said "love IT !! " then suggested a simple word , "Thine " I was looking for that word in my mind all day ! when the person becomes a Teacher and not so much a critic :)
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
    I loved this one!!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 9/28/2013 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my sweet friend ! sometimes better less said !
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Kelly....this is good write...thanks for stopping by on my page.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 9/28/2013 3:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ! you are a good poet ~