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Personal Senryu Inspired

Have existed in yellow Peaked with gold Now living in blue Splendored by red No longer covered in black but, staind in deep purple SunshineWilliams

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2015 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:01:00 PM

Hugs back & thank you so much Eve :), jill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 8:33:00 AM

I enjoyed your colourful approach. Congrats.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Richard :), jill

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:20:00 PM

Vibrant colours of ur poetry mesmerise jill, congrats on super win!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:02:00 PM

Thank you for your beautiful words Doctor :), jill

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/3/2015 8:58:00 PM

Congrats on your multicoloured poem and your win

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:03:00 PM

Thank you Dave :), jill

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:47:00 PM

Hi Jill, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:04:00 PM

Thanks soo much SKAT A! :), jill

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:24:00 PM

Jill, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:05:00 PM

I return your love...thank you Linda! :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 4:47:00 PM

very colorful one. Congrats for your win.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:06:00 PM

Thank you sooo much Andrea, it's nice getting to know you :), jill

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2015 4:36:00 PM

Beautifully written senryu, Jill! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so much :), jill

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/3/2015 5:20:00 AM

Jill, reading your notes and reply to Jim's comment gave me the proper perspective in how to appreciate this senryu, for it comes from deep inside you. Hope it got the win and recognition it deserves. You are appreciated, lady. hugs!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:08:00 PM

Thanks for taking time to get me! I am enjoying getting to know you & your works very much!! Hugs back-at-ya :), jill

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/3/2015 4:48:00 AM

Great Jill! Congratz! You did best!

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/23/2015 5:07:00 PM

Thank you very, very much Mr. Celestial :), jill

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 8:51:00 AM

You helped paint a beautiful image and feeling. Jill, thank you for sharing your inspirational thoughts. Skat

Jill Spagnola
Date: 7/5/2015 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Skat :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/24/2015 8:31:00 PM

Such a nice dedication.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/23/2015 10:48:00 PM

Excellent write Jill,this is dedicated for a friend,........well penned........Afolabi.

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2015 10:07:00 PM

These are descriptive of the many moods that color our emotions...nicely penned...thanks for stopping by...:-}

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/22/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your attitude of gratitude. I have many things I am grateful for. However, when God created these infinite cosmos of the Universe, she chose specific species to walk in twos on Earth until they each meet again on the other side. Enjoy your view :) I hang tuf...no worries, Jill I hope I did not insult you by taking inspiration from your poem, you didn't say.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/22/2015 1:30:00 PM

Jill, today....when i walk in the woods, i can smell pine-needles underfoot as Red Pines tower above me (there is actually a red (Norway) Pine within reach on my deck of my 2nd story condo!) a blessing i am grateful for, that is enough....

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/22/2015 7:18:00 AM

nice, Jill! truncated "staind" works well....have dappled in use of "color palette, myself" have those cool color-glass in iron "garden sculptures" at my condo....put'im in my community garden plot for summer.....your end-line use of palette words is cool.....happy holiday! jimbo

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/22/2015 12:59:00 PM

I knew you would respond! The title to my poem is an indirect dedication to you, who taught me Senryu :] I'm a fan. This holiday has been the most difficult for me for the last 7 years. This is the 8th Memorial Day without my husband. Earlier in one of your replys you inquired about SunshineWilliams. She is our daughter that I will one day meet on the other side along with my Jimmy. For know I will breathe. Thanks for helping me to take deeper breaths Jimbo!