Get Your Premium Membership

Personal Journey

Poems from the Norse-lands Snowlands – Personal Journey I have come back to the Snowlands, Perhaps for the last time in this life; I need their benediction When I perform the ancient rites. I need that blessing on me, Before I leave the Northern lands, And travel to far places, Where my Gods hold no command. The words I'll speak, were handed down By those that share the blood; Long before the first runes had been carved, Before Odin hung, on Yggdrasil 's wood. They were spoken first when Ymir's blood Was spilt to form the seas, And his bones were raised as mountains, When the Snowlands, came to be. It break my heart to leave this place, But I know my time has come; And destiny has set my sails, Towards the Southlands, and the Sun. So now I kneel, and pledge my soul, Forever to this place, Knowing the day that I am blessed by death, It can return, to find peace amongst its race. © Fingleton (Juillet 2016) (Löst Viking) https://www.facebook.com/pages/Löst-Viking/746104845419195

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/7/2016 12:51:00 PM
John A,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2016 11:25:00 AM
John Anthony, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things