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On Chains

He walked into greasy metals bars soaked with a mind drifting over the divide, but I could sense his eyes were bare... charged as mistaken identity in a shoot-out wailing for a flight out into this rusty cell. As the door slammed to nowhere on hinges of judgment's unbalanced scales; my cousin knew nothing about tomorrows... a head bowed to the ground: the earth on his feet trembling from purgatory’s shame, crumbling on prayers seemingly unheard with a dreadful life thumb-marked by a gavel's bang. Scenes flipped quickly within this hour of ominous time : and I was cramped with angst; not realizing that in a quick moment he would have unsure tomorrows... yet our family pledged, we shall break all chains of evenings and morns, until justice finds its way to atonement. 9/8/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/8/2015 2:03:00 PM
The sharp reality of being treated unjustly boils me up. This convincing poem reflects your compassion and courage-- the diction, flawless!
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:54:00 AM
Your write flows eloquent within the readers mind brought to the beautiful imagery which convey the within.... I love how it was constructed.....A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:22:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely imagery and emotional write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:23:00 AM
Justice denied is awful! Your rallying poem is a most worthwhile read today. 7 and over for me.
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:29:00 AM
The wheels of justice so slow and rusty these days. One hell of a feisty poem!
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