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Olive Loved the Butter Cream Sauce

OLIVE LOVED THE BUTTER CREAM SAUCE Olive loved the butter cream sauce but she was very slim Once-over from her doctor Dicey “You should only dream” Olive dreamt a honey lake Shake’s frozen custard, and cake But they tasted guano shake doctor was a fatty scream OLIVE LOVED THE BUTTER CREAM SAUCE ©rajat kanti chakrabarty November 2014

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Date: 11/11/2014 2:39:00 AM
Very good Rajat! Good use of word rhymes and the whole limerick is very humorous, my dear friend! You made me smile more tonight. Thanks for sharing. Write on! A 7 for you it is! Love and light! Xxxxx D.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/11/2014 9:01:00 AM
Thank you D Love:::::::rajat

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