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No Deposit, No Return

Your wishes can't regain, A thrill so long ago. To once again reclaim A past you wouldn't know. You view a different dance, With unfamiliar tune You pine for lost romance, Yet treasure not the Moon. Meter - Iambic Trimeter (Cataletic). A-B, A-B Rhyme. Gene Bourne. 06-11-14 .

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Secrets Inyoureyes

Date: 8/10/2014 8:49:00 AM

Beautiful...

Gene Bourne
Date: 8/10/2014 2:05:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem, Talicia, and your generous comment. Best wishes...Your PS friend.....Gene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/12/2014 1:08:00 PM

A most beautiful write, Gene. Life is too short - we have to enjoy each moment to the fullest because once it's gone we can't recall it. Well done!

Gene Bourne
Date: 6/12/2014 9:13:00 PM

Thanks so much for the encourgement. and commenting on the poem.....Best wishes to you..... Your PS friend....Gene.