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Natural Blanket

*Locks of white spumes droops
  on rug of emerald moss--
  Blanket of cold rocks

*Lock-- tress of hair

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  1. Date: 11/21/2009 2:13:00 PM
    very unque take! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 1:29:00 PM
    I like how everybody got a different interpretation out of this picture. Congratulations on your placement!

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 7:58:00 PM
    Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your placing in Raul's Contest well deserved Honor YOUR POETIC Talent is inspiring ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 4:37:00 AM
    Congratulations, Ismael, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this absolutely stunning haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

  1. Date: 10/21/2009 8:52:00 AM
    Oh, I Love The Vivid Contrast of Imagery in this Haiku ! ... (I Love Snow) And the Description of Nature as A Woman with cold and uncombed hair is so unique... Excellent MoonBee

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:16:00 AM
    I really liked the imagery you put in this haiku--very jampacked indeed! Enjoy reading your writes! & I look forward to reading more :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win...I love all these Haikus and am glad I didn't have to judge. Marty

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 11:43:00 PM
    congratulations on winning in Raul's contest..well deserved win-Charma

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 9:13:00 PM
    A very lovely read indeed my friend. Congrats on you win in Raul's Contest. I thank you for your welcomed commets onmy work as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 10:50:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning in Raul's Contest! Great job, Ismael! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 8:05:00 PM
    Dear Ismael, Congratulations on your beautiful Haiku win. Lainie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 5:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your WIN in Rauls contest with this beautiful Haiku! Beautiful images, Ismael! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 3:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Ismael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 3:39:00 PM
    Congratulations Ismael! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 2:39:00 PM
    Ismael, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 4:43:00 PM
    Wonderful use of imagery for a creative view. Enjoyed it! Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 9:06:00 AM
    Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 12:07:00 AM
    Excellent viuals Ismael.Thank you for your welcome comments & kind words to day.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 3:27:00 PM
    Beautiful picture piece, Ismael! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:44:00 PM
    Nicely done Haiku. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest. Sara