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My Spiffy Valentine

~she’s provocative my valentine, selection passion of love pose ~valentine spiffy like a new money she glows nature’s natural ~infatuating no snooty rowdy beauty nor melancholy For and in Honor of Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Special Sentimental Senyru

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them John. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/18/2011 12:29:00 AM

Many Congrats John for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

Date: 2/17/2011 11:51:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu, John. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 9:01:00 PM

I love what you said in last part: that she is not snooty or melancholy. That is a huge plus! Congratulations in Linda's contest, john.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2011 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations john on your well deserved win in this contest of Linda---kashinath

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2011 4:55:00 PM

Lovely, John. Great win. Congratulations to you

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/17/2011 10:01:00 AM

Hello John, Congratulations on your win in the contest. What a beautiful tribute to someone special! As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/17/2011 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, John. Spiffy, down to earth is always good : ) Love, Annalise

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/17/2011 3:56:00 AM

Hey John, congratulations on your win with this superb entry in Linda's contest :-) W

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2011 9:08:00 PM

fascinating! congrats for the whooping win, john! hugggs, :) nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/16/2011 8:13:00 PM

A lovely valentine. Many congrats for this win.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2011 7:40:00 PM

I'm sure Linda likes this sweet entry. Congratulations on winning in her contest with this.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/16/2011 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 5:40:00 PM

Congrats Moses on your success in my contest luv... thankxx for your constant support and encouragement always...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/6/2011 5:39:00 AM

A great entry that Im sure will be at the Top my friend... well done and written...Michael

George Aul

Date: 2/5/2011 10:12:00 AM

Great words...Good luck. Thanks for the comment......George

Sierra Biersack

Date: 2/4/2011 5:40:00 PM

your welcome :) and thanks for commenting on mine it means a lot to me too.

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2011 6:41:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my blog. This poem is just enchanting, best of luck~~

Skat A

Date: 2/3/2011 8:51:00 PM

WONDERFUL POEM AND ENTRY, ENJOYED~SKAT

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2011 5:24:00 PM

excellent entry for the contest, John, I agree with Dr Ram on this extremely poetic. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/3/2011 2:44:00 PM

No one needs a snooty, rowdy or melancholy Valentine, John. I love the way you described your beauty as provocative, spiffy and infatuating. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2011 1:49:00 PM

I bet she loves this, john and she sounds really infatuating! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

James Tate

Date: 2/3/2011 12:59:00 PM

Way to go. She will like this, I'm sure. Thanks for comments on my poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2011 6:32:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Moses ... good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer and as always thankxx for your constant support of my endeavors on Soup.. luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/2/2011 3:38:00 PM

This is a fantastic write, with internal rhyming, alliteration, quite poetic, John