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My Sonnet

Shall I compare thee to a Winter's day? Skin art more cold and pale, Her mind races, as it becomes a snowy storm, Eyes filled with fear, heart filled with pain, Winter calls for long sleeves, to hide the scars of yesterday, She knows not how to love and be loved in return, Neglected by mother and father, With nothing or no one left, Shes beginning to think her life is worthless, Cutting both of her arms as she walks outside, To die in the snow where she feels most invisible, Her parents cry out "Why"? She thought to herself no more blood, sweat, and tears, No more heart filled with pain, No more eyes filled with fears. ...written in my English class today after reading sonnet 18, I guess its ok.

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Date: 4/27/2011 1:50:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jessika. I think you did extremely well with this. I share the sentiments, that I hope you have happiness and that you enjoy your time here. God Bless You, R.M.
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:46:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jessika. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your lovely creative poetry tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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