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My First Love

Here alone with nothing to call my own with tears from yesterday baby with did I do and what did I say to make you leave me this way My heart don't beat as fast as the drums why can't you refresh my memories bring back the light and that touch that kept me alive and ready I miss when you wake me up with just one kiss stearing me in my eyes like I was your feast and least a year take it all the way back when we first had sex damn boy I was surprize on the way you headle my thighs pull me closer and softly came inside My first love and my first time making grown up love it was fun better then a walk in the park holding hands I wish I can repeat it again because I can't stop thinking about the first time

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Date: 8/30/2010 8:16:00 AM
niice write!..thanks for your kind words on my poetry!
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Date: 8/26/2010 3:17:00 AM
The first time is sometimes the best time, nice read. One small criticism, proof read before publishing.
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